【翻译】Insomnium - Heart Like a Grave 全专辑翻译

Heart Like A Grave
心境死地
Insomnium
翻译：雪兔猫
01. Wail of the North【北之悲号】
Under these cold northern stars
北辰临下流照寒
Songs are filled with sorrow
人间声声歌惨淡
Brief is the time of summer winds
六月息暖唯恨短
Moon is sad as the night
月夜戚戚未阑珊
Here the callous frost slowly crawls inside the hearts
此处之无情霜，逐渐将心灵侵占
Here the winter's breeze will break the purest soul
此处之朔风中，纵有冰心亦难全
Grown on this rimed soil we've learnt to rue and yearn
生于冻土之间，始觉希望与怅然
Grown in these bleak woods we've learnt to forsake our dreams
长于死林之中，而知一梦终绝断And again, the mourning unfolds before me
悲戚复还，其渊亦展
Like an open black grave
恰似死地，其广亦暗

02. Valediction【诀别】
Underneath the blackest soil
于至暗之泥土下
I lay down my warm, beating heart
息我温暖搏动的心脏
And deep beneath the frozen ground
于至深之寒地下
I bury down my deepest thoughts
葬我一生深情与幻想
Because the road I've chosen
只因我所选择之路
Is free of fortune and desire
幸运欲望未曾涉足
Or the mundane toil and worry
亦无悲欢侵扰世俗
Because the trail I've taken
只因我所踏足之路
Leads down into the darkest shores
其终之岸昏暗莫测
Where the stars have passed away
星隐其曜终已不顾
Tonight, the world is burning
今夜此世正历劫火
Black smoke hides the skies
墨烟四起，隐天蔽日
Tonight, dark clouds rising up
今夜黑云之势正崛
Swirling, shadows engulf the land
其压千城盘旋欲摧
Shadows engulf the land
黑云压城，其势欲摧
By the side of forsaken path
于被弃之道路
I leave behind my old shadow
我别旧影而去
Into the deep under these shores
于暗海之至深处
I drown my broken memories
沉我破碎回忆
Because the road I've chosen
只因我所选择之路
Is free of fortune and desire
幸运欲望未曾涉足
Or the mundane toil and worry
亦无悲欢侵扰世俗
Because the trail I've taken
只因我所踏足之路
Leads down into the darkest shores
其终之岸昏暗莫测
Where the stars have passed away
星隐其曜终已不顾
'Cause tonight, the world is burning
今夜此世正历劫火
Black smoke hides the skies
墨烟四起，隐天蔽日
Tonight, dark clouds rising up
今夜黑云之势正崛
Swirling, shadows engulf the land
其压千城盘旋欲摧
Shadows engulf the land
黑云压城，其势欲摧
For something to change
若为一事变迁
Something has to give
必将一物奉献
For something to grow
若使一机生长
Something has to yield
必有一者消亡
(I kiss the light goodbye)
如此我吻别光亮
'Cause tonight, the world is burning
今夜此世正历劫火
Black smoke hides the skies
墨烟四起，隐天蔽日
Tonight, dark clouds rising up
今夜黑云之势正崛
Swirling, shadows engulf the land
其压千城盘旋欲摧
Shadows engulf the land
黑云压城，其势欲摧

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03. Neverlast【只作旦夕】
When you revel and feast
觥筹既倾，肴核既尽
Bask in victories
你难止胜骄之心
When you ravish the crown
陶醉于号天下令
Claim the godly reward
而请赏自神灵
Do not forget the lurking crows
勿忘潜形之墨鸦
Sitting on the gallows
其歇于绞刑架间
Looming against the sky
迫近盘旋于天
Waiting for your demise
只等毁灭临前
Soon on the scaffold
不久断头台上
The king will stand
刑徒曾贵君王
For the mirth and glory
乐荣华而尽散
Will never last
仅俯仰间
For the love and ardor
得所欲而终倦
Will never dure
情随事迁
When you behold her glow
当你见烨然之女
Fairness and the grace
其形绰约独立
When you can feel her warmth
当你居美人之旁
Blazing right beside you
觉其华色含光
Do not forget the unkind fate
勿忘时运弄人之变
Doom that hangs upon you
末日于你头顶高悬
All here is meant to end, it's only temporary
万物有极，只作旦夕
Even the fairest flower
纵芳草之华难逃
Will soon die
注定早殀
For everything is meant to end
凡物必有其休止
Nothing here is built to last
无一可终日流驶
When you long to touch the sun
当你欲揽金乌于怀
Grab the sphere of divine clouds
愿将泠善流云撷摘
Don't forget that if you reach the utmost peak
勿忘身在高层险峻
Then the fall down shall hurt even more
其后必历千丈颠陨

04. Pale Morning Star【苍白晨星】
Long is the trail of the day
漫长为白日轨迹
Into the lap of the evening dusk
直至暮霭之终极
Sweetest the hour of sleep
最甘之时莫若休憩
For I am weary of sorrow and pain
尤在我为苦恨缚系
Into the tender night I now lapse
良宵沉我倦怠躯体
Into the slumber so sound and deep
直下而堕幻梦绮丽
Arching over the ravines of time
似虹飞越时间壑隙
Bridge into the shrouded lands
若桥连通封冻土地
For you left before me
先我去者
My pale morning star
我的苍白晨星
Now you walk in undying light
你已行至永恒为光芒所浸
And I'm still chained in this rimed soil
我犹囿于泥土为寒霜所侵
When twilight wreathes my senses
暮色四合将感官沉浸
The heavenly ones will linger here
是时灵者来兮如云
Right here by my feverish side
于我凄切身侧且停
The ghosts of those I loved
是我所挚爱的魂灵
Gone is the cruelest longing now
神人途殊最不忍追忆
Undone this grief of mine
此恨绵绵，再无绝期
And still I can sense you
而我犹觉你的气息
Still I can hear your voice
正如我犹听闻你的言语
Still I quiver under your touch
亦如我犹深感你的轻抚
Celestial shine in your hair
你发梢掩映着星汉
Empyreal crown upon your brow
眉间亦冕苍穹之冠
Radiance blurs my teary eyes
光耀烨然模糊我的泪眼
Broken is the sphere of the body
破形骸而终解倒悬
As the spirit will ascend
其神超而凌尘凡
Broken is the sphere of the body
形骸既破终解倒悬
As the spirit will ascend
其神已凌尘凡
Over the infinite boundaries
超于三千世界无限
Over the gulches of death
亦越冥河之峡险
Once you carried me
你尝指引我
From the night into the sun
涉长夜而沐白日
And now I follow your steps
我今追随你
Into the unseen land
直至目所难测之地
Sore are these weary eyes
历沉重双眼之痛
When I pass into the light
而入光亮之中
Blinding the eternal glow
永恒光芒灼烧
After the long path in the dark
在夜途之终眩耀
Wide awake amidst the dream
入梦犹然清醒
I stand by your side
我与你相偕伫立
I tremble before your gleam
我颤抖而仰望着你
My pale morning star
我的苍白晨星

不必太谦虚吧

ddl告急，缓更，但绝对不会弃坑！

还是白话翻译吧，你这水平也没多高，严格按文言文要求你这都是病句，风格杂糅，显得做作。

楼主回来了，卡了大半年韵脚压上了。