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1楼2014-10-21 21:37回复
    Rubik’scube has been one of the most famous toy in the world for about 40 years. TodayI’ll talk about the rubik’ cube
    Why thetoy is named rubik’s cube?because itsinventor—Ernő Rubik. He is an Architecture professor in theHungary. Atfirst, he just wanted the little toy to help his students learn the cube’sstructure. He designed the picture for a long time and found it difficult torecover the cube. Finally, he decided to reduce the toy and named it by hisname.
    Let’s learn about the structureof the rubik’s cube. A rubik’s cube ismade of 26 small cubes. Each of them can move except the core. So you cannot count all thechanges of the Rubik;s cube.There are a number of kinds ofrubik’s cube in the world now,such as the Pocket Rubik’s cube,Rubik’s revenge,Rubik’s professor and so on. Now let’s watch the masters how to play rubik’scube.


    2楼2014-10-21 21:37
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      2025-12-12 10:49:47
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      ppt见四楼


      3楼2014-10-21 21:38
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        4楼2014-10-21 21:42
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          个人感觉貌似细节问题不少……坐等英语大神!


          IP属地:贵州来自手机贴吧5楼2014-10-21 21:47
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            下节英语课我要讲解视频the road to 6.77


            来自WindowsPhone客户端7楼2014-10-21 21:49
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              扫了一眼,那个应该是in Hungary不用the吧


              IP属地:安徽来自Android客户端8楼2014-10-21 21:50
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                第一段toy改成复数形式,第二段开头,because后面加of,he just wanted 后面的the改成a。。。就这些,我英语不是很好,又改错的或漏掉的请见谅


                9楼2014-10-21 21:52
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                  哟哟哟好好好


                  IP属地:浙江来自iPhone客户端10楼2014-10-21 22:03
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                    楼主ppt能发给我吗


                    IP属地:浙江来自iPhone客户端11楼2014-10-21 22:04
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                      来几个速拧视频!


                      来自Android客户端12楼2014-10-21 22:04
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                        极速狂热下载下来播一段


                        IP属地:上海13楼2014-10-22 19:55
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                          不错


                          IP属地:江苏来自手机贴吧14楼2014-10-22 19:59
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                            幻灯片?非脱稿?


                            IP属地:上海来自Android客户端15楼2014-10-22 20:24
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